On Tuesday the 28th of November we had athletics day I was involved with these activities Shotput,Discus,Long distance (running), Sprints, High jump and long jump. I think I done well in these activities and I was proud of myself because I had awesome results with my running. My favorite part of the day was my running because I love running and I am fit. My goal for next time is that I do better and long jump and high jump. I hope you like my para graft about athletics day please do not hesitate to comment.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 30 November 2017
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Hey Quaid,
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year! I am Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!
I really liked your paragraph about athletics day, and it's really nice to read that you had awesome results and were proud of yourself! I am not a very fast runner but I do like running. I sometimes go for a run with my sister before dinner or before bed to keep myself fit and healthy. I hope I get to read more of your writing and comment on them!
To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!
All the best,
Jade C.
Thanks for the feedback
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