Kia Ora, for the past few weeks I have been doing some writing that is called orientation and I will show you what a orientation. an orientation is a piece of writing that has who where when why. Here is my piece of writing that i have got to share with you.
''The bell rung for me to go home. I was so excited because tomorrow I am going to invercargill to see my sisters tomorrow.I am going because it is the school holidays.''
Can I please have some specific feedback on my next steps.
please do not hesitate to comment have good day bye.
