Hi guys welcome back to another blog post.
Today I am going to share with you a piece of my writing. I have been working on this for a while and I have been learning about 5 senses which are Feel,Smell,Taste,emotions and Hear.We have been learning to describe not tell in our narratives and in our writing. I have been working really hard on this and this piece of writing is about my dog that I have just got. I have also been working on key words in my writing that maybe you can use to understand your writing as well.Please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post have a nice rest of the day and week.BYE
Here is my writing.
2. The door slammed behind me as I ran as fast as I could to see my dog. But then I realised that my dog had been taken I tasted the fear in my mouth. The dog's favourite dog toy was a doll that said I love you with two kisses. The dog that I have been living with had been a really rare dog and I didn't know what I was going to do without it. I don’t know how someone would be able to get into my house it is impenetrable.
Tuesday, 25 June 2019
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Hello Quaid.
ReplyDeleteIt was interesting reading your story. You have used an interesting word that I will need to look up so I know its meaning.I have noticed you mentioned 5 senses but you haven't included 'sight'.
Do you really have a dog or is this just a made up story and what sort of dog do you have,if you have one?