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Thursday, 23 August 2018

I didn't do it

Hi guys today I have a pace of writing that is a paragraph about a paragraph that I have made. This is a piece of writing that I like and I think you guys will enjoy it. I hope you like my paragraph of writing and you learn something from it have a good day. Here it is


  1. I didn't do it. I said like an erupting volcano. ''But of course you don’t believe me you never do'' I said. ''I didn’t steal money out of your wallet didn’t you spend it''.


I hope you guys like this blog post and you lean something from it Please do not hesitate to comment .BYE
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 August 2018 at 10:18

    Sup Quaid,
    I really enjoyed your writing. I liked how you explained how you were saying your words. For a expel when you said like an erupting volcano. Next time look at you spelling I saw you spell piece wrong you wrote pece. Well I really liked your writing cant wait for for of you writing.

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  2. Anonymous27 August 2018 at 10:19

    Hi Quaid,
    I enjoyed your blog post. next time you should check you spelling because you spelled piece wrong you spelled pace. next put and what your group is doing. next you could put I did not finish my writing in steed of I did not do it. but I still really enjoyed reading you paragraph.

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  3. Quaid3 September 2018 at 09:37

    Thanks for your feeedback and I will work on my spelling for next time.

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