Hi guys,
Welcome back to my blog to day I am going to share with you some of my writing i have been doing this writing for one day And It is very personnel so don't make fun of it please. I have done this for 10 minutes so this was really good for 10 minutes. I worked with a buddy to do this and he checked my mistakes on my writing. Please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post can I please have some Feedback on this Bog post.
Here my writing.
Last night I had a dream. It’s about my cousin,Alexia that died in a car crash. I didn't want to dream about this but I was in the dark and I was afraid of the dark so it was the only option. I dreamed about how I miss her very much and I want to hug her one more time! I dreamed about all the things we did together and how much fun we had. All the memories just came back to life(good memories).I can remember the day I last saw her and it feels just like yesterday, but it wasn't. It was about 3 months ago. I bet she is up in heaven watching me write this today and is learning that I will not forget about her. She used to call me Hillbilly and she's the only person that would call me that. If someone else said it, I would not reply.I would reply back to only her. That's the last time that I will here someone say that again.Rest In Peace #4eva18
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 22 February 2019
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