Writing week 6

Hi guys welcome back to another blog post.

Today I have a piece of writing to share with you I put my best effort in to it and remember that it is not real. I done this with my teacher Whea Chelsea. I done this about me and two of my friends and this was about war. I haven't quite finished it but it ends at a good part.


 I want to know some more Ideas for this story can you let me know how to finish it in the comment. Please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post have a nice rest of the day and the week.BYE

Here it is...

Me Sam and Truby were the only one left in the war. We were trying to fight the German that were left in the war so that new Zealand would make it a free country. But that was quite hard when there were three of us facing 12 Germans with machine guns. I took leadership and went out first to lead to the Germans I thought of making a plan of sneaking behind them and then shoot them so we get the guns. We done just done that and killed them all we made it to the end of the no man's land now we had to camp and just wait for the Italians to find us and we got to try and shoot them. We had slept the night but it was quite rough knowing that they were coming to kill. We got up in the morning and we saw them down this cliff so we shot at them I had an ak47, Truby had a shotgun and Sam had a machine gun. We were the best team in the world and we got them all. We had to wait for the next arrivals we didn't know these ones because the Italians didn't tell us because we killed before they could. We had to sleep it off. In the middle of the night I heard some gunshots and so I woke up Sam and Truby to tell them...