Today I have a debate about the human body. I have been learning about the Muscular system. I want some feedback so I can learn about the body system a bit more. These are the feedback that I want in the comments. Do you think the joke is good? Do you know the joke? Have you got a better joke? Does this joke hook you in to my writing?
Here is my writing.
Almost got kicked out of school today. Why? For carrying a 6 pack and 2 guns. A 6 pack is a group of muscles in your body . 2 guns is the muscles in your arm. The six pack also lets you move your body around with other muscles. I think that the muscular system is the most critical system in your body.
I hope you like my blog post and you learnt something from it. Please give me some feedback about my writing debate. Please do not hesitate to comment on my blog. BYE
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