Hi guys welcome back to another blog post.
Today I have a blog post about what I have been doing for writing. This writing is a descriptive writing and we were using onomatopoeia. I really liked this paragraph of writing and it was really fun to do. I hope you like my piece of writing and you enjoy reading it. Have a nice rest of the day and week. Keep safe on the roads and on the streets. BYE
HERE IT IS!!!
I could hear the audience cheering. It was deafening .The commentator was speaking with a loud voice, I could hear the audience cheering it was deafening .The commentator was speaking with a loud Eco voice. The gunshot shocked adrenaline through my body.The guidance guys were guiding us to the finish line. My heart was beating so it struck the earth to shake.The other racers puffing behind me were like a heat pump voice
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