Today I have got some writing for you this is a "showing". also "not telling" because it makes it more interesting and better. I like this writing because I can under stand it more and that is better for me. Here is my writing and please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post have a nice rest of the day and week.BYE and KEEP SAFE!!!
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 7 August 2019
My Writing Prompt
Hello Readers,
Today I have got some writing for you this is a "showing". also "not telling" because it makes it more interesting and better. I like this writing because I can under stand it more and that is better for me. Here is my writing and please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post have a nice rest of the day and week.BYE and KEEP SAFE!!!
Today I have got some writing for you this is a "showing". also "not telling" because it makes it more interesting and better. I like this writing because I can under stand it more and that is better for me. Here is my writing and please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post have a nice rest of the day and week.BYE and KEEP SAFE!!!
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello, I find this pretty cool. Have you thought about using more describing words? I do really like the ones you have put in though. I think this is really good writing ok bye.
ReplyDelete-your old friend Jasper
That comment was not me it was a class mate.
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