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Wednesday, 7 August 2019

My Writing Prompt

Hello Readers,

Today I have got some writing for you this is a "showing". also "not telling" because it makes it more interesting and better. I like this writing because I can under stand it more and that is better for me. Here is my writing and please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post have a nice rest of the day and week.BYE and KEEP SAFE!!!






2 comments:

  1. Hello, I find this pretty cool. Have you thought about using more describing words? I do really like the ones you have put in though. I think this is really good writing ok bye.

    -your old friend Jasper

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  2. That comment was not me it was a class mate.

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