Today I have a blog post about my writing that I have done I have some words that I had to put in the challenge. The reason we were doing this challenge is to see were we put our adjectives. The challenge was you had to get around 1 hundred words. I got close to 1 hundred words but I got 99. Please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post have a nice rest of the day and the week. KEEP SAFE!
My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognise pulled up beside me. The fragile wheels were barely holding the car up straight. I was disillusioned when the guy looked at me and said “get in”. I couldn't see inside the car because the windows were shaded. think he liked me because I was dressed exquisitely. The blustery wind was blowing my dress. I was shocked with fear because some random pulled up beside me asking me to get into his car. I looked again to see my brother driving the car.
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