Today I have a blog about my writing. With my writing I had to make it so I had to use more "ing" words. The reason I had to use more "ing" words is because it makes your writing stronger and powerful.
Our WALT for writing is
W.A.L.T
- Write in past progressive tense
- Use powerful action verbs
- only include what is powerful, meaningful and important
“No, no, no!” I was sliding back into the dream.I was gasping struggling to breathe also thumbing through the place between. I was creaking trying to scream for help. I was sniffing like a poor dog. I was trying to get out of the dream but I couldn't it was like a vacuum cleaner it kept sucking me in. I was in the place between. I didn't know what to do. I was trying to wake up still strugiling. I got stuck in the sheets
Here is my writing please do not hesitate to comment on my blog have a nice rest of the day and week.BYE
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