Writing

Hi guys welcome back to another blog post,


Today I have got some writing that I have done. I have trying to get this writing perfect for my blog.  I have tryed so hard on this and put a lot of effort into it to get it to this standerd. I have got highlighted bits on this writing blog and I have got a challenge for you.

 The challenge that I have got is you have to guess what colours the strategies are in the writing. Good luck.
My Walt is W.A.L.T  Use my six senses to describe, characters, places, feelings etc. 


Here it is...

‘I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky. Suddenly the lights went out and the room went pitch black. I scrambled out of bed and got my daughter and chucked her over my shoulder. I stumbled down the stairs just with my finger tips touching the rail, the thought that lightning could strike any moment was chilling my mind.

I went down in the forbidden basement and light a candle. It was pitch black apart from the candle lighting our way.No one has been down her for over 70 years. All that was down there was some bikes that my dad worked on and a descrastful washing machine. I could taste the fear in my mouth. “Oh yuck” there were dead rats down there as well. I placed a blanket down and put my daughter on it to keep her shielded, secure and warm.

I was trying to get my daughter to go back to sleep so she doesn't see what happens outside of the house. The thunder and the lightning was keeping me unfocused from her. She then got out of the blanket and walked to the window.

We both looked out the window and said “Wow”. The lightning was different colours now it was fascinating. The sky was rumbling like the bloodbottler stomach but we weren't afraid anymore and were not hesitant to go outside to all the lightning and the thunder.

Please do not hesitate to comment on this blog post. Have a nice rest of the day and week.
BYE